You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic:
The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.
Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
You should write at least 250 words.
Many people argue that the concept of having more than one careers in order to earn money is the trending fashion. While having a career as a single is turning as a old fashioned one. I totally disagree with the former statement and in this essay I will mention the reason behind my rationale of career choice along with the supporting examples.
On the one hand, nowadays, they say that the way to earn more money is to work more than one jobs. This can be possibly done. Though there are several drawbacks to it. Firstly, the struggle of time management will be foremost problem. Secondly, Although you might earn double income with the help of multiple careers, the work-life will be imbalanced. Furthermore, if you may wish to study on top of it, there will no personal time to spend with you and you family. However, this may lead to a toxic and unhealthy life.
On the other hand, having a single career has many benefits. Broadly, at first, you can focus on your career and improve further in it. Another, you can have a peaceful balance work life. Also, there will be ample amount of time to look after yourself. Additionally, you can upgrade yourself if you wish to pursue higher education. The sky is the limit to enchance you career. Although having a career need to be expanded, the hobby is a great idea to transformed as another career. This way, you can balance out the aesthetic career life to relive from busy world.
To conclude, in my opinion, having single career might be old-fashioned today,but it is golden way to earn wealth including family, education, and money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 164, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ving a career as a single is turning as a old fashioned one. I totally disagree w...
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Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...an one jobs. This can be possibly done. Though there are several drawbacks to it. Firs...
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Line 7, column 78, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
...ngle career might be old-fashioned today,but it is golden way to earn wealth includi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, while, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68683274021 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47292298368 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551601423488 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.98737852 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.3157894737 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7894736842 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57894736842 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299405847211 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973001443246 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661508841448 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192924576458 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404368573553 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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