Write a letter to a friend to ask for his/her help to collect money for a charity organization. The letter needs to cover the following details: -Why do you want to collect money for the charity organization-Ask for your friend to help-Explain in detail h

Hi John,
I'm writing to tell you about a fundraiser being carried out by "Plant a Tree" which is a Non Government Organization that endeavours to create more green spaces in our locality.

They are planning a plantation drive on 20th May and trying to set up a record for the most number of saplings being planted within a day. As they are mostly driven by charity donations, they are falling just a little short on their funds. So they have asked local volunteers to help raise the remaining amount.

I want you to join me this Saturday to generate some collections from our neighbourhood. I'm planning to cover at least four blocks from the place i stay. I would pick you up at around in the morning.

Hoping to have a great run. See you later.

All the best,
Prashit

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Hi John, Im writing to tell you about a fundraiser ...
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Line 2, column 98, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ut by 'Plant a Tree' which is an Non Government Organization that endeav...
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Line 2, column 144, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Government Organization that endeavours to create more green spaces in our local...
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Line 4, column 40, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... They are planning a plantation drive on 20th May and trying to setup a new recor...
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Line 4, column 62, Rule ID: CAN_SETUP[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to set up'?
Suggestion: to set up
...lantation drive on 20th May and trying to setup a new record for the most number of sap...
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Line 4, column 73, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'record'.
Suggestion: record
...rive on 20th May and trying to setup a new record for the most number of saplings being p...
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Line 4, column 190, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...y are mostly driven by charity donations , they are falling little short on thei...
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Line 4, column 197, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ostly driven by charity donations , they are falling little short on their funds...
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Line 4, column 202, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
... driven by charity donations , they are falling little short on their funds. So ...
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Line 4, column 243, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
... falling little short on their funds. So they have asked local volunteers for hel...
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Line 6, column 65, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is Saturday to generate some collections from our neighbourhood . Im planning to ...
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Line 6, column 89, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...some collections from our neighbourhood . Im planning to cover atleast four bloc...
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Line 6, column 92, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...e collections from our neighbourhood . Im planning to cover atleast four blocks ...
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Line 6, column 120, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hbourhood . Im planning to cover atleast four blocks from the place i stay.I woul...
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Line 6, column 149, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ver atleast four blocks from the place i stay.I would pick you up at around in ...
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Line 6, column 156, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...east four blocks from the place i stay.I would pick you up at around in the mor...
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Line 6, column 185, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ace i stay.I would pick you up at around in the morning. Hoping to have a grea...
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Line 8, column 27, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e morning. Hoping to have a great run .See you later. All the best, Prashit...
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Line 8, column 29, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: See
...morning. Hoping to have a great run .See you later. All the best, Prashit
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 653.0 937.175257732 70% => OK
No of words: 137.0 206.0 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76642335766 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42121322205 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60926038163 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.766423357664 0.622605031667 123% => OK
syllable_count: 187.2 290.88556701 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2894587847 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.625 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.875 4.34317383033 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 2.54639175258 746% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162978565809 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592592359417 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544154266206 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0711312238319 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457934813127 0.0580467560999 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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