Write a letter to a friend to ask for his/her help to collect money for a charity organization. The letter needs to cover the following details:
-Why do you want to collect money for the charity organization
-Ask for your friend to help
-Explain in detail how your friend can help
Dear Juvan,
I have been one of the members of the "Help-a-child" charity organization in my community. As an active member, the group is planning to hold a program the following week. With regard to this, I am writing to ask for your assistance in collecting the funds that we need during this occasion.
The charity group is sincerely would want to render their service and offer it to the street children of Dagupan City. We are a non-government organization which obtains our funds mainly from church and individual donations. Hence, if we have come short with our resources, we ask other organizations and people who could help us make this program possible.
As my good friend, I am asking for your assistance in raising money to suffice the budget out charity is aiming to collect. I know you have been the president of the musicians club in your school. Perhaps, I may suggest if it will be possible to hold a mini-concert in the weekend, This would entail a lot of your time but I believe this would be successful.
Call me as soon as you received this, so that we can talk more of the plans and if you have a bright idea for us to work on. Thank you in advance for your help.
Best regards,
Fiona
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, so, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1014.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60909090909 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91624121257 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595454545455 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3622774861 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290247397932 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103853072221 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106781831258 0.0603063233224 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174583606999 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051756558797 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.