Write a letter to a friend telling him/her that you’re going back to your home town and you want to give him/her some furniture. Please say
– why you thought about him/her
– describe the furniture
– suggest a way for him/her to get it
Dear John,
I'm writing to inform you that I'm going to join my family business back in the home town. You can take some of furniture items from my apartment since you were looking for a study table and chair few days ago.
Since I knew that you were in search of a small size study table and chair which could adjust in study area of your apartment. As I am going to move back to my home town so you can have these two items with you.
This set was bought by me from an old market and it has antique design and colour. Secondly it will be easily adjustable because of its round shape. Also, you liked and praised it a lot when i bought it.
I will leave the city at the end of this month therefore you may come to my apartment to take away the items. Otherwise, you can avail the service of local delivery but in that case you will pay the charges.
Inform me about your plan on early basis. Looking forward to seeing you at my place.
Your friend,
Syed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear John, Im writing to inform you that Im going to ...
^^
Line 2, column 31, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ar John, Im writing to inform you that Im going to join my family business back i...
^^
Line 6, column 192, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...so, you liked and praised it a lot when i bought it. I will leave the city at ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 786.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.18085106383 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.93464985901 2.54303337028 76% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622340425532 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5751268438 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.5 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20836094889 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800194344847 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516437249788 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115985168129 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054989474803 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.67 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.56 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.