Write a letter to a friend who just moved into a new house that you are sending a gift to. Include
• What the gift is
• Why you chose it
• How it will be delivered
Dear Jot,
How are you? I hope this letter finds you well. I would like to congratulate you on your new house and I am writing in concern to the gift which I have bought for your new house.
Yes, I have bought a gift for you. Guess! What I have bought for you. Well, let me let you that I have purchased a Vase for you. Whether you recognize that last year we went to a business meeting in Shimla and while roaming in the wooden market, something got our eyes that flower vase. At that time, we left it because we thought it is costly and came back without purchasing it.
It was very fascinating and you were captivated by the art made on that vase. Actually, recently I again got a chance to go there and in the meantime, I got a letter from your end saying that you moved to a new house. At that time, that vase strikes my mind and immediately went to the shop for purchasing it.
It has some delicate stonework on it would ruin if I would have sent in the courier. My colleague is about to visit your town next week and I have given him your new address and contact number. The time he will be free he will call you and hand over the vase to you.
I am eager to see the happiness on your face after having the vase. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours Truly,
Kinu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 54, Rule ID: IF_WOULD_HAVE_VBN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'had sent'?
Suggestion: had sent
...elicate stonework on it would ruin if I would have sent in the courier. My colleague is about t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, look, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 59.0 32.9175257732 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1034.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 253.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.08695652174 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1282373702 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 322.2 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9670303763 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.8235294118 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8823529412 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.05882352941 4.34317383033 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253144673566 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907991091774 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760627767201 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151895281218 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839276800649 0.0580467560999 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 8.37731958763 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.85 8.71597938144 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.95 7.59969072165 78% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.