Write a letter to a friend who is visiting your country for the first time.
- Tell him the best time of the year to come.
- What places they could visit
- Invite them to come to your house
Hi Robert
I came to know that you are coming to India for the first time. It will be really great to meet you after such a long time. First of all I think it would be lovely if you would come around rainy seasons which is mostly from July to September month of the year. Because it is a sight to behold there is greenery and cool weather everywhere.
Secondly, there are myriad of places you can visit and explore in our country. For instance, beautiful beaches of goa, magnificent fords of Jaipur, cultural heritage in Delhi, Khajurao and Sanchi. Also you would love to go on trekking in the hills of Himalayas as you are an adventure freak. Your wife, Pepper would also love to go deep sea diving in Maldives. I am sure you will not get bored and will have experience of a life time.
You should come along to my home which is in metro city Mumbai. I still remember the time I spent with you during my stay in Florida and my wife is also eager to meet you. Furthermore, it is on your way to goa where both of you can can enjoy and relax. I am really looking forward to spend time with you.
Eagerly waiting to hear from you soon.
Yours
Chris
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 198, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...heritage in Delhi, Khajurao and Sanchi. Also you would love to go on trekking in the...
^^^^
Line 9, column 425, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...get bored and will have experience of a life time. You should come along to my home ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 229, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: can
...is on your way to goa where both of you can can enjoy and relax. I am really looking fo...
^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 282, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to spending'.
Suggestion: to spending
... and relax. I am really looking forward to spend time with you. Eagerly waiting to ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 21, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aiting to hear from you soon. Yours Chris
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, still, for instance, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31221719457 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15059262232 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601809954751 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4794843917 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.0714285714 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7857142857 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 4.34317383033 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157722025622 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616985141358 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522980102517 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0835898342722 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554347888583 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.