Write a letter to a friend who is visiting your country for the first time.
- Tell him the best time of the year to come.
- What places they could visit
- Invite them to come to your house
Hi Robert
I came to know that you are coming to India for first time. I am really excited to see your after such a long. First, of all I think it would be great if you would come during rainy seasons around which is mostly from July to September month of the year. Because, it is a sight to behold there is greenery and cool weather everywhere.
Secondly, there are myriad of places you can visit and explore in our country. For instance, beautiful beaches of Goa, magnificent fords of Jaipur, cultural heritage in Delhi, Khajurao and Sanchi. Also you would love to go on trekking in the hills of Himalayas as you are quite an adventure freak. Your wife, Pepper would also love to go dive sea diving in Maldives. I am sure you will not get bored and will have experience of a life time.
You should come along to my home which is in metro city Mumbai. I still remember the time I spent with you during my stay in Florida and my wife is also eager to meet you. Furthermore, it is on your way to Goa where both of you can can enjoy and relax.
Eagerly waiting to hear from you soon.
Yours Lovingly
Chris
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 198, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...heritage in Delhi, Khajurao and Sanchi. Also you would love to go on trekking in the...
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Line 9, column 431, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...get bored and will have experience of a life time. You should come along to my home ...
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Line 13, column 229, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: can
...is on your way to Goa where both of you can can enjoy and relax. Eagerly waiting t...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36492890995 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19739682756 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635071090047 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4279007304 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.7857142857 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0714285714 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 4.34317383033 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161383453747 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591462928486 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510510192014 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0850523011548 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622121124417 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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