Hello Ritesh,
I hope you are doing well. I got aunt's mail about your visit to India as she has stated that you are yet to book you ticket. Therefore, I just thought of suggesting you to book ticket for beginning of October. This will be the best time to visit here and you could explore more about the cultures and diversity of the country.
I strongly advise you to include north India in your trip as you can see the several ways of celebrating the festival "Navratra" worship of Goddess Durga; in different states. I'm planing to visit Kerala with my school friends, so I request you to join us in that course if your schedule allows. We will have great fun together.
It's been a long time since mommy hasn't seen you and is exuberant to meet you. Hence, you must include visiting my place for at least a week and spend time with us.
Looking forward to see you soon..
With love and best wishes,
Saurav
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... of Goddess Durga; in different states. Im planing to visit Kerala with my school ...
^^
Line 7, column 34, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hasn't
...er. Its been a long time since mommy hasnt seen you and is exuberant to meet you. ...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
... spend time with us. Looking forward to see you soon.. With love and best wishes...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 32, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...h us. Looking forward to see you soon.. With love and best wishes, Saurav
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, so, therefore, well, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 764.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52071005917 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45940394481 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662721893491 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7717812544 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.4545454545 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3636363636 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150701690079 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593537622703 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553386974816 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.077712721579 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512497037711 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... of Goddess Durga; in different states. Im planing to visit Kerala with my school ...
^^
Line 7, column 34, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hasn't
...er. Its been a long time since mommy hasnt seen you and is exuberant to meet you. ...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
... spend time with us. Looking forward to see you soon.. With love and best wishes...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 32, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...h us. Looking forward to see you soon.. With love and best wishes, Saurav
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, so, therefore, well, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 764.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52071005917 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45940394481 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662721893491 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7717812544 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.4545454545 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3636363636 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150701690079 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593537622703 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553386974816 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.077712721579 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512497037711 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.