Write a letter to a friend who you borrowed something from that got damaged. In your letter
Mention what you borrowed
Describe how it was damaged
Say how you will fix it
Dear Chris,
I hope you are doing fine today.
I would like to let you know that I have a small accident yesterday night, and your vehicle Honda Civic which I did borrow for a family function got damaged from the backside.
Let me explain to you in detail. I was driving back to home town to attend the wedding event of one of my relatives when the accident happened. The road was slippery due to rain, and I was on a very nominate speed when the other vehicle tried to overtake me with full speed, but he couldn’t able to control his car as the speed was high and he got hit the backside of mine car. Although, there are minor scratches on the main body; however, the bumper had been broken into two pieces.
I went to the authorized dealer here in the town and asked them to replace the bumper entirely so, it will give original look rather than opting tenting and painting option. I hope, the vehicle will be ready in the next two days and will hand over to you as soon as I will be back home in the city.
I thought to let you know in advance so, you won’t get shocked as it is your new Car
Your friend.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 59, Rule ID: YESTERDAY_NIGHT[1]
Message: This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, 'last night' is used.
Suggestion: last night
...t you know that I have a small accident yesterday night, and your vehicle Honda Civic which I d...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... as I will be back home in the city. I thought to let you know in advance so, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.22119815668 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.08104190633 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.2808242958 44.8134815571 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.777777778 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1111111111 16.8248392259 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240172081112 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929690183969 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728154727833 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133159786211 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482037765016 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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