Write a letter to a friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged.
Apologize for damaging the product
Explain what happened
Say how are you going to fix the issue
Hi Rita,
I am sorry for writing so late, but I would like to explain to you why I have not yet return the book I have borrowed from you.
I have to own up that I have damaged the book accidentally. I can understand how important that book was to you as it was gifted to you by your late father.
What happened is when I was reading the book, I knocked over my cup of tea and tea got splashed over the pages which were open at that time. Almost all the pages are full of stains now.
However, I have given that book at the repair center, and they will make it up so that it will look new. I will be getting the book next week from the repair center, and then I will send it on to you.
Again, I am sorry for the delay in telling you. I hope you can forgive me.
Thanks and Regards,
Vandana Mankotia
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t I have damaged the book accidentally. I can understand how important that book ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 657.0 937.175257732 70% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.00609756098 4.54256449028 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.00693140058 2.54303337028 79% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 203.4 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6384913941 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.7 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246275066973 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090831786477 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760874412836 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145234232944 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0849900151974 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 89.08 70.7449484536 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.68 8.71597938144 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.26 7.59969072165 82% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 41.2886597938 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.