Write a letter to a friend of yours with whom you had a quarrel recently.
Dear Manish,
I am writing this letter to apologise you because owing to some misunderstanding,I behaved very rudely and quarrelled with you.However, currently,I am am feeling too bad because I did not want to behave in this way.
To commence with,as you know,I am a short-tempered person and because of this problem,I cannot control over my temper.Moreover,on the day of function,I wanted some help from you to solve some problems related with my new architecture project but,when I asked from you about it then you gave me flat refusal and at that time,I was not expecting that you will give me such type of response,as a consequence,I lost my temper on you.
Beside it,after our quarrel,I was behaving rudely with our mutual friends and was screaming on umpteen people then suddenly,your wife came to me and she told me that you got fed up with family problems and because of that,you were in dilemma and unable to cop up with your problems but,I thought that you did not want to help me.Last but not the least,currently,I am feeling guilty and I want to meet with you at your home.
I am looking forward to hearing from you and I hope that we will meet soon.
Your truly,
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 56.0 32.9175257732 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76442307692 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95916097751 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581730769231 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 16.3608247423 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 170.695518395 44.8134815571 381% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 198.2 76.5299724578 259% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.6 16.8248392259 247% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.4 4.34317383033 239% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 2.54639175258 864% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281721086177 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14441192272 0.0766984524023 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068885455331 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15567818172 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738728864013 0.0580467560999 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.8 8.37731958763 260% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 70.7449484536 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 7.45979381443 227% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.22 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 8.62886597938 330% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.4 8.54432989691 215% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.