You have decided to go on a holiday to a foreign country for two weeks, and you want one of your friends to go with you. Write a letter to your friend asking him to accompany you. In your letter,
- Explain where and when you want to go
- Give details of the travel, dates and cost involved
- Describe some of the things you want to do.
I hope life is treating you very well and I am writing this letter to let you know that next month,I am planning to go Canada for 2 weeks.However, currently ,I am alone for this trip so I want to go with you at that place because you are my best friend and I will definitely like to have your company.
To commence with,I would like to go to Canada at 27th July,2018 and I can assure you that it would be an itinerary journey so we would enjoy it alot.Moreover,I want to go to Canada with a makemytrip.com plan because it has a plethora of travel plans at affordable prices, therefore ,I am going to choose a 2 weeks plan including with all meals and hotel room at 1.5 lakh per person.
Beside it,I would like to tell you that it would be a wonderful holidays because myriads of worthwatching place are available there and at that place,we can enjoy some water sports,bullet train travel, paragliding and toothsome foods etcetera.Last but not the least,you can also check some other activities on internet which are available in Canada and we can enjoy all these.
I am looking forward to hearing from you and I hope you will give me company in this trip.
Warm regards,
Sandeep
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , I
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Suggestion: However
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Suggestion: ,
...go Canada for 2 weeks.However, currently ,I am alone for this trip so I want to g...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: , I
...o have your company. To commence with,I would like to go to Canada at 27th July...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'holiday'?
Suggestion: holiday
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'foods'' or 'food's'?
Suggestion: foods'; food's
...train travel, paragliding and toothsome foods etcetera.Last but not the least,you can...
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Suggestion: Last
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53240740741 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73795137712 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 16.3608247423 263% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 149.348451616 44.8134815571 333% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 195.8 76.5299724578 256% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.2 16.8248392259 257% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.8 4.34317383033 318% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 2.54639175258 628% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336934197468 0.216113520407 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171169479847 0.0766984524023 223% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141709893277 0.0603063233224 235% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213961849808 0.12726935374 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126278195588 0.0580467560999 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.5 8.37731958763 257% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 70.7449484536 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 7.45979381443 237% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.88 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 8.62886597938 324% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.2 8.54432989691 225% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 8.15463917526 343% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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