Dear Igor,
I hope my letter finds you in the best of health. I have no words to express the feeling of embarrassment for writing to you the said letter. I am begging for your forgiveness on the blunder I have done. Allow me to elaborate.
I cannot thank you enough for lending me your favorite wrist watch. Further, I am aware how important the watch is to you. However, I am feeling very heavy inside and it saddens me more to inform you that I have accidentally damaged the watch.
As you know, I have been shooting for a stunt scene for my upcoming movie and during the shooting the cable that was supposed to hold the bike malfunctioned and I lost the balance and fell from over 20 feet height. I damaged the watch in the drop. I did not care about my injury but I was shattered to have damaged the watch which you hold close to your heart.
Even though, the watch has been damaged but I went to show the watch to the nearest store and I was apprised by the store owner that the glass can be fixed, but it will take about 20 days to find a replacement as it is a vintage watch. I have already paid advance for the glass replacement. In the meanwhile, I am keeping the watch with me and will hand it over to you post replacement.
Once again, I am sorry to let you down. I hope you can forgive me for which I will forever be grateful.
Yours Faithfully,
Brad Jason
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ent for writing to you the said letter. I am begging for your forgiveness on the ...
^
Line 7, column 238, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r 20 feet height. I damaged the watch in the drop. I did not care about my injury...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 32.9175257732 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1126.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 265.0 206.0 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.24905660377 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3953972715 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51320754717 0.622605031667 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 350.1 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6563072944 44.8134815571 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.375 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5625 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0625 4.34317383033 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232793751897 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884156513292 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539156089402 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150572491596 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521939241552 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.07 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.