The globalization has led to growth of many companies across the world as a result many of these companies are opening office in every global city. As a result, wealth has accumulated which makes them a giant. This rate of expansion has led people to raise questions on the effect which come with these companies. The essay will agree with the statement.
To start with, there are many companies that are far more powerful than a country. This is a result of sheer hard work that the employees have put in to deliver to consumers. However, with the accumulated wealth these companies are destroying the competitions by taking over the small companies which are trying to trying to race with these organizations within the market which will in-turn support the consumers. Further, these big companies want to build their strong hold in a market by eating out their prospective rivals and maintain their stronghold and later charge exorbitant amount for the services rendered. For instance, Apple Inc has more wealth than 20% of the countries in the world and now has gone on spree to buy out small organization. Therefore, these are not healthy for the whole ecosystem.
Secondly, the organizations are massive contributors to every government in terms of tax of various forms and giving employments etc. The heights that these legal entities achieve undoubtedly play a big role in the world dominance. However, there is no margin for error. Further, many people are relying on these organization for their daily survival and if something goes wrong with these entities then it will have a devastating impact on the economy. For example, in 2009, the world’s largest financial brokerage services Lehman Brothers closed door and the impact was felt across the world which unstabilized many economies causing recession. Therefore, growth comes with a cost and can have a humungous impact.
In conclusion, it can be said that the business with a lot of power, but there are certain coercive actions which ought to be taken and government interference is required in these organization to monitor problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 307, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'trying to'.
Suggestion: trying to
...king over the small companies which are trying to trying to race with these organizations within th...
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Line 5, column 309, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this organization' or 'these organizations'?
Suggestion: this organization; these organizations
...or. Further, many people are relying on these organization for their daily survival and if somethi...
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Line 7, column 176, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this organization' or 'these organizations'?
Suggestion: this organization; these organizations
... government interference is required in these organization to monitor problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09798270893 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78147701279 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530259365994 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.7942760709 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.058823529 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4117647059 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35294117647 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146977388339 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527948923345 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053147370912 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0940869287087 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045723261929 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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