Dear Sir,
I hope your day is going great. I am writing this letter to make a complaint about the poor condition of the road in my area. After the Christmas holidays, the potholes on the road became worse, and there is a very big crack that divided the road at Justice junction.
The bad state of the road causes a lot of traffic for residents since it is the only road that leads to Agbama Housing Estate. In addition, this daily gridlock on my road affects me personally because I have to drop my kids at school before I start going to my workplace. For this reason, I am always late to work.
However, I suggest that there should be gutters on both sides of the road so that water can be channeled out properly, Also, filling the potholes would not solve this issue, so I am suggesting that the road should be worked upon from the scratch. I believe my opinion will create a long lasting solution to the road in my area, and residents would not be inconvenienced by the bad roads anymore.
I hope to hear from you soon.
Adam.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40721649485 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3544290534 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592783505155 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.0505975907 44.8134815571 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237065152688 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094568254791 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769261787074 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134210574252 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0924919444101 0.0580467560999 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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