Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter:
-describe what problems are
-explain how these problems are affecting you
-suggest what you would like the company to do
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my grievances towards the bus services on the bus route number 202 that is from Huda Metro Station towards Atul Kataria Chowk. There are a plethora of problems and to start with, the driver on the stated route is quite an impolite person and can be seen talking on a phone while driving. Owing to this, we had a narrow escape yesterday.
Secondly, the bus never comes on time. I am a regular commuter of this route at 7.30 am but the bus always comes 15-20 minutes late and because of this the travellers always gets late. also, there is no other bus at the said timing at the same time. we have complained several times about it to the driver as well as to the bus stop head also but they do not pay heed to our complaints.
I would request you to take strict action against the person and introduce one more bus on this route for a hassle free commuting. I am sending one copy of this letter to a local newspaper also.
Looking forward to your prompt response.
Yours faithfully
Dennis
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...f this the travellers always gets late. also, there is no other bus at the said timi...
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Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...us at the said timing at the same time. we have complained several times about it ...
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Line 4, column 189, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...opy of this letter to a local newspaper also. Looking forward to your prompt respon...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, second, secondly, so, well, while, as to, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37113402062 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23542622492 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644329896907 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2333084071 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0909090909 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 4.34317383033 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135390450353 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048195471922 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0279685415821 0.0603063233224 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0749163112865 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291373685359 0.0580467560999 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.