Write a letter to the manager of a hotel where you stayed and left two important things.
- Give details of your stay
- Why those two things are important
- How he cab return the things to you
Dear sir,
I am writing this letter to request you check my thing which I left in your hotel room.
My name is Mayur Doriwala and I stayed in your hotel on the 10th to 15th February.I was in room number 201. I left my digital camera and Greece watch in hotel room when I arrived home. I want to inform you digital camera even in a brown leather bag which has the cock my name and please watch left on the dressing table which is next to cupboard. Could you please check for me? Because of both things are very costly.
I would like to inform I got both things from my parents on my last birthday hence, both things are very important for me. My day bought digital camera from London, when he went to business tour in January. And wrist watch is my grandfather's sign both things are very valuable for me.
I am extremely grateful if you could contact me. You could send a thing by two pay courier service and you have to pay no money in this type of courier service. I would be most grateful if you do this for me I would like to give my address in my address is 201, Shri Bharti, residency, Pal, Adajan, Surat. And my mobile number is 9898398983.
I am sincerely looking your response very fast.
Your Faithfully,
Mayur Doriwala
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...your hotel on the 10th to 15th February.I was in room number 201. I left my digit...
^
Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...atch in hotel room when I arrived home. I want to inform you digital camera even ...
^
Line 5, column 379, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...upboard. Could you please check for me? Because both things are very costly. I would...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, may
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1015.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35622317597 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20613382854 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523605150215 0.622605031667 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0097007494 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.6666666667 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5333333333 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 4.34317383033 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249021317309 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839839625116 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651950444546 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146468828426 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791181209609 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.21 7.59969072165 82% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.