Write a letter to the manager of the transport corporation of your city, complaining about the insufficient number of local buses plying in your area in the morning time. Write the problems encountered by the residents of your locality.
Dear Sir,
I am Shreyas Parab, the resident of Indralok, Bhayander. This area is newly developed and populated by the residents with an increase in the number of buildings. As a result, transportation is becoming an issue.
As this town is in the city's outskirts, most people travel to Mumbai to earn their bread. During peak hours, that is in the morning and evening, the bus stops get crowded, and people are hanging on the doors to reach on time. Such life taking the risk can prove fatal if the service does not improve.
Moreover, considering women's safety concerns, it is difficult for them to embark on the bus. With the increase in a rush, it is inappropriate for them to travel on the same bus as men's travel.
The BEST corporation should invest in increasing the number of buses for this area, during office hours to travel safely. Above that, if there are separate arrangements for females, it will be a better situation during rush hours. Requesting to address this problem at the earliest, and the letter's copy is also sent to the local newspaper.
Yours faithfully,
Shreyas Parab
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 32.9175257732 43% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80526315789 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63709422053 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647368421053 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5524614623 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0833333333 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91666666667 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148607027699 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496404192549 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486141806258 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0635173252923 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447198645741 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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