Write a letter to the manager of the transport corporation of your city, complaining about the insufficient number of local buses plying in your area in the morning time. Write the problems encountered by the residents of your locality.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to draw your attention towards the irregular bus service in my area, which has become an everyday concern for the people availing the facility.
I daily commuted to work using bus number 6 and that was the best option for me till now due to its exact arrival time. However, I have observed that since last 15 days the bus do not arrive at its time and I have to wait long. Surprisingly, last Friday bus was not seen even after waiting for 30 minutes and eventually I had to choose other mode of transport to reach the office. Indeed, this has become a big headache for me as I am getting late to office often. The bus is very irregular these days and I had to stop using this facility. Consequently, many a times I need to rely on private transport, which is unequivocally very expensive. In this case; despite the public transport, I get refrained from its benefit. I am sure this would have created many problems for other citizens as well.
I would ask you to take proper action by training the staff such that bus schedule is not disturbed so that people can use the bus facility conveniently. I expect that you would do needful at the earliest.
Yours faithfully,
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 561, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a time' or simply 'times'?
Suggestion: a time; times
...using this facility. Consequently, many a times I need to rely on private transport, wh...
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Line 6, column 155, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... can use the bus facility conveniently. I expect that you would do needful at the...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49545454545 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54387532181 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618181818182 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7781009887 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4166666667 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58333333333 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102475694866 0.216113520407 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0429986346609 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553950152085 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0650812115742 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580318489429 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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