Dear sir,
I am writing this letter to complain about a burning issue faced by people living in greater park, which is located about 60 kilometers away from downtown. Especially during moring hours, there is a acute shortage of buses.
As most of the residents in this area would have to travel to city each day either for their work or for education, there is a severe rush particularly during the peak hours. However, the number of buses are not adequate enough to meet the demand. Furthermore, some buses are not keeping time as per the schedule and this also pile up the hazzle.
Hence, i request you to negotiate the problem effectively.
I appreciate your response in advance and hoping to receive response from your side.
Yours faithfully,
Rrkha Rajan.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 198, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...specially during moring hours, there is a acute shortage of buses. As most of ...
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Line 7, column 8, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...this also pile up the hazzle. Hence, i request you to negotiate the problem ef...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 32.9175257732 33% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 645.0 937.175257732 69% => OK
No of words: 131.0 206.0 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92366412214 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38312328216 3.78020617076 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52790498147 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.732824427481 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 203.4 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.049453691 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.625 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23679625239 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811411411091 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564151575595 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100209543912 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463333678084 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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