The invention which has revolutionasied the entire world is internet. Every sector can avail its possibilities to advance further, especialy, business where innovations and creative ideas play a crucial role. To a great extent, the merits will eclipse the detrimental impacts.
First and foremost thing to be considered, while conducting a meeting is it venue. It should be selected in such a location that, it should be convenient for everybody to access.in such situations, online meeting is an effective alternative because everyone can participate from any corner of the world without being physically present there. Hence it greatly reduce the cost involved in organising such an event.
Furthermore, trainings are inevitable aspect of business as it improves productivity. As most of the trainings are scheduled for a large group of employees, the timing is crucial. In addition, company have to allow leave and travel allowances for attending such a conclave. If it is implemented through online media, then it will be more successful as there will be no time constrains.
However, the effectiveness of online source is superficial, it is very difficult to evaluate the outcome. Likewise, as there is no physical interaction, the involvement from everyone cannot be guaranteed. Another issue that might interapt the course is technical troubles while using a online platform.
In conclusion, as every firms want achieve their target with minimum invesment, internet isbthe best choice. Thus minor deletrious effects can be overlooked.
- Leaders and directors in an organisation are normally older people. Some people think younger leader would be better. Do u agree or disagree? 56
- Write a letter to the manager of the transport corporation of your city, complaining about the insufficient number of local buses plying in your area in the morning time. Write the problems encountered by the residents of your locality. 56
- In many countries, more money is spent on transport system in the cities. In contrast, very little is spent in rural areas.What are the effect of this and What can be done to solve this problem. 89
- In many countries crime is on increasing. Wht are the main reasons for this? What can be done to improve the situations? Support your opinion with relevant examples. 73
- Many people today are worried about cybercrime such as hacking and identity theft What problems does cybercrime cause and what solutions can you suggest for ordinary people and businesses to take Give reasons for your answer and provide ideas and examples 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 344, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...without being physically present there. Hence it greatly reduce the cost involved in ...
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Line 3, column 361, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'reduces'?
Suggestion: reduces
...sically present there. Hence it greatly reduce the cost involved in organising such an...
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Line 7, column 285, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ourse is technical troubles while using a online platform. In conclusion, as e...
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Line 9, column 90, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'isbthe the best'.
Suggestion: isbthe the best
...target with minimum invesment, internet isbthe best choice. Thus minor deletrious effects c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, however, if, likewise, look, so, then, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52941176471 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09863053504 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659663865546 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.0558061124 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7333333333 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8666666667 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0755075613638 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.024619292947 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0281205046292 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.037130461211 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243638108877 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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