We are living in a techically advanced world where every thing is changing at a startling pace. Likewise , our choice of reading has also changed with the advent of internet. This essay will discuss both the advantages and disadvantageas of this matter.
First and foremost merit of digital reading is its convenience. We could avail the content , which is relevant and suitable for us , from internet at any place and time. For instance a recent survey revealed that about eighty percent of professionals depend on e- book for their daily use because auch an option does not require them to carry a bulky and heavy book while thry are travelling to some place. Furthermore, no payment is required for reading or even downloading from e sources. Similarly , there is no time restriction for uasge.
On the other hand, this trend has got several detrimental impact on our society. Eventhough , a lot of materials are available on the internet platform, it is often difficult to sift the information and marshal the facts. In addition, there is no authenticity to the contents published there. Moreover, the feeling one could experience while reading a physical book could not be matched with those on internet.
In conclusion, although the digital means can be used to supplement our knowledge , we cannot completely rely on them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, likewise, moreover, similarly, so, then, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1111.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83838090112 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672727272727 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.8072886374 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4615384615 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9230769231 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0955273497827 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0328182583119 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512861225173 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0554287765729 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432206836922 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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