Although crime is increasing, governments have not able to negotioate effectively.many a man is of the opinion that it is the result of social issues and penury, while others opine that it os because of the nature of individuals. There are arguments on both side, howevet, we will discuss both here.
First and foremost reason for criminal activities is people are dissatified with the resources they have. It may due to several factors like education, employment and living standard. Many third world countries are not able to provide adequate education and skill training to its citizens, which inturn cause unemployment and poverty . Furthermore, political instability and famine exacerbate their condition. Hence they adopt measures which will fetch them wealth , even though the method is illegal.
On the other hand, personal traits of individuals defenitely impart a devious effect on their deeds. Todays paradgime shift is a reason for delinquency. People lack a fear of law and they believe that money is the only thing needed in life and for earning that they can indulge in any activity.
In conclusion, i strongly believe that whatever may be the the reasons , crime which is rapidly increasing should be tackled. And would like to reiterate that social circumstances are the element that decides the rate of crime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, third, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1120.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23364485981 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84512859766 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668224299065 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.835681758 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180008640599 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051011594258 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553228703374 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106429067302 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754406738826 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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