Some people believe that crime is a result of social problems and poverty, others think that crime is a result of bad person’s nature. Discuss both view and give your opinion
The roots of crime from social issues and poverty or innate characteristics have evolved as a major topic of concern in today’s society. While some people argue that crime result from bad nature, I am of the opinion that social problems and poverty are two main causes.
There are several underlying reasons why some people advocate for the root of criminal actions resulting from individual characteristics such as violence or greed. First and foremost, it is widely believed that person who is cruel is easier to commit a crime than a kind one. For instance, schoolchildren who are frequently bully others are easily turning into offenders more than their peers when they grow up. Another reason is that laziness and greed are also perceived as causes of crime. Instead of working hard, some people choose to steal money or other possession to meet their demands.
However, I am more convinced that social issues and poverty are two main reasons leading to crime. There are some social issues which bring about unlawful actions such as unemployment or economic degradation. Those conditions push some people resorting to breaking the law as their last option. Furthermore, poverty is also the culprit of the crime. Not having enough money to make ends meet, some people are easily tempted to a career of crime by stealing money or other possession from other people.
In conclusion, although some people believed that innate characteristics as a culprit of crime, I still of the opinion that social conditions and problems are two causes leading to illegal activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, so, still, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13513513514 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69963974259 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53667953668 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4658819153 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.307692308 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346004530885 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121348672047 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838961788745 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226798594446 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509451138255 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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