In many countries crime is on increasing. Wht are the main reasons for this? What can be done to improve the situations? Support your opinion with relevant examples.

In recent times, the most critical problem faced by almost all countries is crime, which is increasing at a startling pace. There are several attributes for this condition. This essay would attempt to point out the main reasons for this and will also include aome measures to deal it.

Firstly, advanced technology facilitates man with devices which could be used for criminal activities. For example, a recent survey conducted by oxford university revealed that about seventy percent of arms and amumenations trade is done through internet.furthermore, governments are not able to cope that situation due to involvement of people who are different nationals.

Inaddition, several people adopt illegal activities as a easy option for earning money. Inorder to defend that, they become criminals and in certain occasions police are also afraid of such gangs. Another factor which cannot be overlooked is the negative impact of television on children. Since from child they become viewers of shows which portray violence and they begin to regard it as normal. Eventually they start practising.

Effective and rapid methods should be adopted to solve this serious issue. First step that should be initiated in this regard is making everyone especially aware of the matter and try to inculcate morals in them. Next thing is strict enforcement of law and those who violate it should be severly punished. All the techological advancements should be utilised so that the crimes are seldom repeated.

To conclude, for the betterment of mankind, it is essential to maintain law and order. So ever crime should be delt with ample counter acts.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, so, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28244274809 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82245650231 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667938931298 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.0365983878 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201594359338 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059752453323 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424005672978 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106596493036 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477116145305 0.056905535591 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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