Write a letter to a manager whose company is constructing their new office next to your apartment.
-Introduce yourself.
-describe problems you are facing because of this.
-suggest solutions.
Dear Sir,
My name is Darshan Modi. I live in apartment no. 26 on Achole road. I am writing this letter to complain about the ongoing construction of your office next to my residence.
The construction work is being done just next to my parking slot due to which a lot of dust is accumulating on my car and hence I have to consistently wash my car. In fact, in last one week I have washed my car more than three times. Also, the noise arising due to the construction activity is making the whole situation more worse. Everyday I am continuously disturbed by the noise of heavy machinery being used.
I think if the new location of the office is shifted bit further to the opposite of the main building entrance then it would resolve both the issues mentioned above. I strongly assert that these problems must be addressed at the earliest. I am also sending a copy of this letter to my society.
Yours Faithfully,
Darshan Modi.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 321, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'worse' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: worse
... activity is making the whole situation more worse. Everyday I am continuously disturbed b...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 333, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[1]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective, and the comma is missing. Did you mean 'every day, I'?
Suggestion: Every day, I
... making the whole situation more worse. Everyday I am continuously disturbed by the noise ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 239, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...lems must be addressed at the earliest. I am also sending a copy of this letter t...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, then, i think, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 766.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5325443787 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66247204613 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644970414201 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5332485974 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.8333333333 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0833333333 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138720371091 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478127570124 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712774495288 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10465527064 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576593950669 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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