Dear Sir,
I am Dinesh living nearby you at wz-14 . I am writing this letter to share my sheer annoyance because of your office construction. I know as per government norms the construction work should finish by 5:00 p.m . But i can heard noises even after that till late night. i requested worker several time but even after so many request ,nothing happen. So you should please look into this as soon as possible .Please make sure the construction work should finish at 5:00 p.m so that we will able to study as this is our exam time and its affecting our study.
I will looking for your action otherwise i will complain to police.
Yours Faithfully
Dinesh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 39, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... I am Dinesh living nearby you at wz-14 . I am writing this letter to share my sh...
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Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ce because of your office construction. I know as per government norms the constr...
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Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...struction work should finish by 5:00 p.m . But i can heard noises even after that ...
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Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...on work should finish by 5:00 p.m . But i can heard noises even after that till l...
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Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'hear'
Suggestion: hear
...k should finish by 5:00 p.m . But i can heard noises even after that till late night....
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Line 3, column 269, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...noises even after that till late night. i requested worker several time but even ...
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Line 3, column 269, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...noises even after that till late night. i requested worker several time but even ...
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Line 3, column 288, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'several times'.
Suggestion: several times
...hat till late night. i requested worker several time but even after so many request ,nothing...
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Line 3, column 319, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun request seems to be countable; consider using: 'many requests'.
Suggestion: many requests
...d worker several time but even after so many request ,nothing happen. So you should please l...
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Line 3, column 331, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...eral time but even after so many request ,nothing happen. So you should please loo...
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Line 3, column 404, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...lease look into this as soon as possible .Please make sure the construction work s...
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Line 3, column 406, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Please
...ase look into this as soon as possible .Please make sure the construction work should ...
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Line 6, column 8, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'look'
Suggestion: look
...nd its affecting our study. I will looking for your action otherwise i will compla...
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Line 6, column 42, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... will looking for your action otherwise i will complain to police. Yours Faith...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 26.3917525773 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 552.0 937.175257732 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 118.0 206.0 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67796610169 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.29587325169 3.78020617076 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45605826931 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 127.690721649 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.703389830508 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 158.4 290.88556701 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4331240357 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.0 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.75 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.625 4.34317383033 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141910908547 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599402886176 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695337965156 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0843539258481 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506753406886 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 17.0 41.2886597938 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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