Dear Mr. Jovi,
I live at F2 killam apartments . I write this letter to express my disappointment about the room which i share with another girl. That girl timing for study is very odd so it disturbs my sleep and also she used to listen to music very loudly.
I requested her to stop these activities as it is making me difficult to take sleep properly. She also bring her friends in room for whole night and they were dancing and making noise.
So i am very frustrating with such environment as this is so disturbing for working person. She is a student so she did not understand.
I want to change my room so want you to check with person who is working as this will be manageable .You should talk to my room partner and make her understand to change her wrongdoings. Therefore i want you to scold her and get an apology letter for me.
I look forward to hearing from you and arrange different room for me.
Regards
Bryan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: .
... Jovi, I live at F2 killam apartments . I write this letter to express my disap...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... my disappointment about the room which i share with another girl. That girl timi...
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Message: The pronoun 'She' must be used with a third-person verb: 'brings'.
Suggestion: brings
...ficult to take sleep properly. She also bring her friends in room for whole night and...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ey were dancing and making noise. So i am very frustrating with such environme...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ho is working as this will be manageable .You should talk to my room partner and m...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: You
... is working as this will be manageable .You should talk to my room partner and make...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...r understand to change her wrongdoings. Therefore i want you to scold her and get an apol...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 772.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46242774566 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50144627211 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612716763006 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3552469258 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.2 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232880545415 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830582399974 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749043400773 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123758362832 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589107345202 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.