Write a letter to an overseas fiend and invite him/her to a party that you arrange. Please say
• What is the reason for the party
• Give details of the party
• Suggest an arrangement for your friend
Dear sara,
I hope you are doing well. I am writing to invite you to my 30th birthday party that I am going to arrange an especial celebration. The date I tend to hold my party is 05 to 07 of December and I appreciate it if you confirm it before 25.November.
As I mentioned, this party is going to be a special party since I intend to announce my recent accomplishment about my career that night. I mean and I hope it will be a great time. Besides, I invite most of my friends from all walks of my life such as school friends whose I did not meet them for ages.
The party will be at a family hotel located in the countryside. I attached the navigation map and you can ask me if you need further information about the address. There would be complete room for all of the guests with all the necessary equipment such as bed, privet bathroom, and balcony. Also, there would be free transportation to pick you up from airport at time arrival.
As you know, the weather at this time of the year would be wonderful for skiing, I strongly suggest you extend your trip program and stay here for a couple of days. I should admit that there is this opportunity for you to extend your hotel reservation.
Please do not hesitate and feel free to contact me if you need more information.
I looking forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes,
Yalda Asgari.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sara, I hope you are doing well. I am writing ...
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Line 2, column 239, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: November
...preciate it if you confirm it before 25.November. As I mentioned, this party is goin...
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Line 6, column 198, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...dress. There would be complete room for all of the guests with all the necessary equipment...
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Line 8, column 254, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r you to extend your hotel reservation. Please do not hesitate and feel free to ...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...ct me if you need more information. I looking forward to hearing from you. ...
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Line 13, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ard to hearing from you. Best wishes, Yalda Asgari.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, look, so, well, i mean, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1113.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 253.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39920948617 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58754752789 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561264822134 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 341.1 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1388411797 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.2 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264738390221 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780268323552 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658066172297 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12018892632 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687011858423 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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