write a letter to a police officer about a number of teens who camping behind the yard and break the town's silence
dear Mr Smith,
I am writing this letter to you to inform you about a circumstance exists around my house recently. I am John Brown the neighbour of Mrs Folks who is the manager of Green school. You might know her house she is your friend's sister.
this evening a number of teens are camping behind the yard and making so much noise, besides they start dancing and drinking. Their voice of laughing is so disgusting and disturb me because it does not allow me to enjoy reading carefully.
I would be appreciated if you come to my address and attend them to not break the town's silence and respect the people who live here. On the other hand, I afraid after they drunk, they would have done something dangerous like making a fire in the forest.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Dear
dear Mr Smith, I am writing this letter to ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...er house she is your friends sister. this evening a number of teens are camping b...
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Line 6, column 41, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...I would be appreciated if you come to my address and attend them to not break the...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 614.0 937.175257732 66% => OK
No of words: 137.0 206.0 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48175182482 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42121322205 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28468319299 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.715328467153 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 181.8 290.88556701 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.1315766033 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7142857143 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 4.34317383033 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193404726496 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687050381009 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729912008171 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103249160519 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172865916679 0.0580467560999 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.31 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 15.0 41.2886597938 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.