Many people think that regions affect the successful person. What is your opinion about the native region and accomplished person’s influence on the region he belongs to?
Recently, the phenomenon of regions and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of great grownup environment is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both positive and constructive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that sustainable native area can be a plus and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From the educational standpoint, a good environment can provide a society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that being motivated as well as finding role models, are inextricably bound up. According to my personal experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered having role models has a significant impact on mankind breakthroughs. Thus, the beneficial consequences of a good region and personal growth apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of region, slum area might exacerbate the consequences of personal growth Moreover, the fundamental aspects of poor housing related to this reality the demerits of juvenile delinquencies pertain to peer pressure in the neighborhood As a tangible example, a scientific research undertook by a prestigious university has asserted the downsides of petty crimes is correlated negatively with slum housing Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceive the notion of marginal impacts of a bad region.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of safe neighbourhood outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of aiming to achieve success prove the significance of widely used around the world, but also pinpoint motivation implications.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 451, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...housing Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceive the notion of marginal impacts of a bad...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 267.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55056179775 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25377859493 2.71678728327 120% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659176029963 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.830255389 50.4703680194 239% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 164.666666667 104.977214359 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6666666667 20.9669160288 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.55555555556 7.25397266985 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154627506007 0.242375264174 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572981290255 0.0925447433944 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572785385077 0.071462118173 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786415985687 0.151781067708 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375869958741 0.0609392437508 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 12.6369458128 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.12 53.1260098522 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 10.9458128079 155% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 11.5310837438 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.34 8.32886699507 136% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 55.0591133005 193% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.94827586207 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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