Write a letter to a supermarket and complain about an accident which happened then, give some suggestions as well
Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing to inform and complain an incident occurred to me two days ago when I was shopping in the supermarket you are managing.
I am Mina as a PhD candidate of Geology and of course a regular customer of the supermarket. I went to purchase my weekly necessities to your grocery, but unfortunately the floor was slippery because of the milk on it. I fell down with my hands and my elbow was broke. Your staff helped me to go to hospital and utilize the insurance of the store.
According to the above information, I suggest you to employ some stuff who are exclusively responsible for checking the aisles' cleaning continuously.
I hope no seeing such as these incidents in the supermarket by wisely consideration from you.
Sincerely
Mina
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...was slippery because of the milk on it. I fell down with my hands and my elbow wa...
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Line 6, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...isely consideration from you. Sincerely Mina
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 635.0 937.175257732 68% => OK
No of words: 135.0 206.0 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7037037037 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.4086580994 3.78020617076 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00859308866 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 127.690721649 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.688888888889 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1657036059 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7142857143 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112657495911 0.216113520407 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374641346329 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460627814485 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0712431014137 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495548644725 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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