Write a letter to a supermarket and complain about an accident which happened then, give some suggestions as well
Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing to inform and complain an incident occurred to me two days ago when I was shopping in the supermarket you are managing.
I am Mina as a PhD candidate of Geology and of course a regular customer of the supermarket. I went to purchase my weekly necessities to your grocery, but unfortunately the floor was slippery because of the milk on it. I fell down with my hands and my elbow was broke. Your staff helped me to go to hospital and utilize the insurance of the store.
According to the above information, I suggest you to employ some stuff who are exclusively responsible for checking the aisles' cleaning continuously.
I hope no seeing such as these incidents in the supermarket by wisely consideration from you.
Sincerely
Mina
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- Television has had a significant influence on the culture of many societies. To what extent would you say that television has positively or negatively affected the cultural development of your society? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...was slippery because of the milk on it. I fell down with my hands and my elbow wa...
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Line 6, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...isely consideration from you. Sincerely Mina
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 635.0 937.175257732 68% => OK
No of words: 135.0 206.0 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7037037037 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.4086580994 3.78020617076 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00859308866 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 127.690721649 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.688888888889 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1657036059 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7142857143 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112657495911 0.216113520407 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374641346329 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460627814485 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0712431014137 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495548644725 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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