Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you to express my appreciation for the extra efforts exhibited by one of your staff. Their attention to my needs improved my experience with your company. Allow me to elaborate.
I have been availing the service of your tour company for a long time. Recently, I went on tour – 23 which was to New York and Washington D.C.
The name of our tour guide was Viley Macomara. My family and I are not native English speakers and were experiencing difficulty in understanding certain things. However, Mr. Macomara made sure that we did not miss out on a fact and would make us understand in our language using Google Translate.
Further, when we returned back to Toronto, we tried to tip Mr. Macomara to which he refused. He said that due to company policies, he cannot accept any tip. It does not seem appropriate for us to leave without tipping him. As such, I am sending a gift-card which I want you to handover to Mr. Macomara as a token of appreciation and also remove the policy of no tipping.
I hope that you will consider my suggestion and accept my gift for him.
Yours sincerely
Brad Jason
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "needs improved" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'improving' or 'to be improved'.
Suggestion: improving; to be improved
...your staff. Their attention to my needs improved my experience with your company. Allow ...
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Line 5, column 143, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hich was to New York and Washington D.C. The name of our tour guide was Viley Mac...
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Line 9, column 18, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returned'.
Suggestion: returned
...g Google Translate. Further, when we returned back to Toronto, we tried to tip Mr. Macomar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58737864078 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64684215622 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655339805825 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1733820953 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6923076923 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8461538462 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.15384615385 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199343376669 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649370714144 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720782391183 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107853294466 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747608421906 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.