Write a letter to your colleague asking for help in setting up an equipment for your presentation.
In your letter, you should:
tell when and where the presentation will deliver
describe your arrangements
say him/her what equipment you need.
Dear Jacob,
Hope you had an amazing weekend!
This is to let you know that I have a presentation on "Digital marketing" in auditorium of "Pecard Centre" at 17 hathway drive, Scarborough and as it will be held in next week on Monday, which is March 09, 2020, I will need your help in setting up everything there.
Seminar on "Marketing strategies" will be begun in the afternoon that we will need to make equipment to be set up before that. As you know that I have no experience in setting up such devices and you are kind of an expert in those things so I wonder if you can arrange me cables with HDMI ports, stand, projector along with portable sound system because sitting arrangement is of more than 100 people and quality of sound will definitely matter especially when the hall is so big.
If you can go to my website and create one ID with Reference code: ABU07 that will generate your credential to print entry pass that security guards will not bother, just in case, if I will not be around.
Drop me a line with an update. I will directly see you there then.
Regards,
Akash
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- Write a letter to your colleague asking for help in setting up an equipment for your presentation In your letter you should tell when and where the presentation will deliver describe your arrangements say him her what equipment you need
- Write a letter to your colleague asking for help in setting up an equipment for your presentation In your letter you should tell when and where the presentation will deliver describe your arrangements say him her what equipment you need 54
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 214, Rule ID: KIND_OF_A[1]
Message: Don't include 'an' after a classification term. Use simply 'kind of'.
Suggestion: kind of
... in setting up such devices and you are kind of an expert in those things so I wonder if y...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, kind of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 930.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62686567164 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84262951522 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65671641791 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 16.3608247423 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 132.553878149 44.8134815571 296% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 155.0 76.5299724578 203% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 33.5 16.8248392259 199% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246622867443 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960749290584 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572762571329 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126618375936 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315984770421 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 8.37731958763 204% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 7.45979381443 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.17 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 8.62886597938 226% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 8.54432989691 178% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 8.15463917526 245% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.