Dear sir/ madam
I am writing to you in order to seek your assistance, Actually, I will have to display presentation regarding my project which I completed last week and presentation will take place in auditorium at 7.00 o;clock on next Monday. I think you understand, equipment will be required in order to present in font of company employees.
As per instruments, microphone is compulsory because I will give speech and interact with audience, a projector which show all the slides on short film clips and definitely, a speaker can deliver clear voice to people. Moreover, all operators should be controlled by remote, as while presenting, I will be roaming between audience interact with them.
I require all instruments before two days of presentation because I will practice on these equipment and check whether all are working properly or not. After completing, my presentation all equipment will be returned on the next day morning. Believe me, properly take care of all instruments will be done by me.
I hope you will offer me all requirements.
Your sincerely,
xyz
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Dear sir madam I am writing to you in order to seek you...
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...week and presentation will take place in auditorium at 700 oclock on next Monday...
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...sentation will take place in auditorium at 700 oclock on next Monday I think you...
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... by remote as while presenting I will be roaming between audience interact with t...
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... hope you will offer me all requirements Your sincerely xyz
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, moreover, regarding, so, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01123595506 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90655285324 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623595505618 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 178.0 16.3608247423 1088% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 892.0 76.5299724578 1166% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 178.0 16.8248392259 1058% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 49.0 4.34317383033 1128% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207417497738 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.207417497738 0.0766984524023 270% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119087387272 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689893941794 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 91.2 8.37731958763 1089% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -109.19 70.7449484536 -154% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 72.7 7.45979381443 975% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.96 8.71597938144 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 15.92 7.59969072165 209% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 8.62886597938 661% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 73.2 8.54432989691 857% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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