Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing this letter to draw your attention on the detrimental condition of Lions group and would like to suggest to provide help,if possible.
Actually, the particular Union has been working for several years for orphans by providing basic amenitie, but now suffering from scarcity of funds. Thus, it would be a noble cause if you would solve this financial issue on the grounds of humanity.
Since some such children neither have proper accommodation nor many clothes to wear, our organisation can arrange these necessities. In addition, some extra workers could be sent to work as volunteer so that impoverished children's problems can be catered cautiously.
As far as company's benefit is concerned, this timely help to would raise the standard of it in the town and other cities. Therefore, the humane nature of the company will attract more customers, or make the firm reliable for others.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Mariya Roy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing this letter to draw your at...
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Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest providing'.
Suggestion: suggest providing
...dition of Lions group and would like to suggest to provide help,if possible. Actually, the part...
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Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , if
...nd would like to suggest to provide help,if possible. Actually, the particular U...
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Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... suffering from scarcity of funds. Thus, it would be a noble cause if you would s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, look, so, therefore, thus, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 32.9175257732 43% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19135802469 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71352997628 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.777777777778 0.622605031667 125% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4896991823 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4444444444 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 4.34317383033 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204759210348 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729150035492 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687278619458 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888399288498 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0830460121056 0.0580467560999 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.