Write a letter to your English-speaking friend telling him/her about a local event that is to
take place in your town, which would be useful to her/him. In your letter
- Mention the event
- What are the activities involved
- Mention the arrangements you would make for his/her stay
Hi Roma,
I hope this letter will find you well.
I am writing this letter to invite you to an event that is going to occur in next month in my place. As you are doing research on cultural heritage, this function definitely brings you up an add ons to your research.
The event named as "Nua Khai Juhar," which means a new salutation for having fresh corp food, is a famous festival in my locality where it mainly focuses on aboriginal culture. People celebrate in a traditional way. And I am damn sure it'll be a crucial opportunity for you to come over here and discover the culture.
Among several activities, the most significant event is the opera that describe upon the story behind the festival, which lightens up the old traditional values.
And of course you are going to stay with me, so don't bother about staying; quickly zip up your bag and come over my place.
Waiting for your assertive reply.
Manas
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 189, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... this function definitely brings you up an add ons to your research. The event na...
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Line 13, column 40, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
... The event named as 'Nua Khai Juhar,' which means a new salutation for havin...
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Line 13, column 205, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a traditional way" with adverb for "traditional"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...on aboriginal culture. People celebrate in a traditional way. And I am damn sure itll be a crucial o...
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Line 21, column 49, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ourse you are going to stay with me, so dont bother about staying; quickly zip up yo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 794.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81212121212 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52586982354 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.952817244 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2222222222 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1982191919 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075831137561 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422626063639 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963369126528 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345288767264 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.