Write a letter to your English speaking friend who is visiting you soon and asking you what presents your family would like. Write
- Who your family consists of
- What kind of presents each member would like.
- How you feel about your friend coming to visit
Dear Mark,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am glad that you are joining us next month to celebrate Diwali. My family is super excited to meet you.
I thought of introducing my family in this letter, I am living with my husband Punit and 10 years old daughter Soham. I know you love kids, and you will enjoy spending time with her.
I understand that you wanted to know what presents my family would cherish. Honestly, as you are coming from Switzerland, I would love it if you could get famous chocolates for my daughter. Although my husband would fancy a watch, I am fond of magnets. Lastly, it's not mandatory for you to get us gifts only your presence will do wonders.
Finally, I am thankful that you found time to plan this trip. It has been a while since we have spent quality time together. I know you have been busy with your projects and deliverables at work. Therefore, it is a marvelous opportunity for you to escape work and spend some relaxed time with me and my family.
Looking forward to seeing you soon and having a safe flight to Lucknow.
Best wishes,
Haseya
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...u will enjoy spending time with her. I understand that you wanted to know what...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, honestly, if, lastly, look, so, therefore, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51515151515 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3982614524 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626262626263 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.1702451631 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.8571428571 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1428571429 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250136053487 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903895695687 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646192616776 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142371722118 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625541182907 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.