Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoos. Others believe that there are good reasons for having zoos.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Wild animals are kept in zoos all over the world. At present, zoos are a tourist attraction in many countries and need wild animals to attract visitors. I believe that wild creatures should not be kept in zoos and there should be alternative ways to see them.
There are many good reasons for having zoos in our cities. Most importantly, they attract tourists and make money for the city. Visitors get a chance to see the wild animals that they would not see unless they traveled far away. Rare species, like Chinese panda, or Indian tiger, or African rhino for example, are endangered and if we had no zoos they would die. Zoos care for these animals and give us chance to see them. Therefore, we cannot underestimate the educational importance of zoos.
However, many people feel that wild animals should be free. They should not be kept in cages and small areas in zoos. This is cruel for animals and they often die because they are not in their natural habitat. We frequently see stories about rare animals dying in zoos or getting sick because the area is not big enough or suitable for wild animals like lions or polar bears. Also, these creatures are unhappy and sometimes attack humans or try to escape. Caging wild animals is unhealthy for the animals and is cruel.
Both views put forward valid points, however, I strongly believe that zoos are no place for wild animals. If animals need to care for they should be looked after in their natural habitat in game parks or wildlife reserves. Governments should look after the precious wild animals in their country and should close down zoos that profit from them.
In conclusion, although people believe that zoos are good places to keep wild animals because they can earn from them and educate the public, I feel that we do not need zoos anymore. We can look at wild animals on the internet and we feel happy knowing that they are free.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, therefore, for example, i feel, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67857142857 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21617303081 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479166666667 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7846335736 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387266320367 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140123712417 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862348723925 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243331064166 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519759978727 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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