Some individuals think that it is wrong thing ti kept the animals in the zoos however, others believe that zoo and national parks are beneficial for both animals and humun and i discuss both views and give my own opinion in next paragraphs.
On the one hand people think that do not kept animals in the zoos and national parks because freedom is most important for every living things .therefore animals also want to live independently so that zoos do not able to provide freedom to animals. Moreover, animals ingrain basic skills and techniques in forest such as hunting,running and eating habits because forest provide healthy and learning environment and In national parks,the growth and development rate is low of animals.
Opponents on the other hand argue that zoos and national parks good for global because In the national park provide good conditions to animals such as climat ,healthy,food.furthermore zoos also protect those species of animals who at verge of extinctions for instance Tigers at end of extinction in the world hence many zoos protect tiger species and provide healthy environment. Moreover, In the world has many dangerous species of animals therefore, with the help of zoos animals save from human and human save from wild animals.
Finally,In my opinion ,i agree with both view ,forest is right place for animals because god design the forest for animals therefore In the jungle animals spend their life easily and growth of animals are too high in jungle than zoos .however, zoos also beneficial for wild animal and also for human because humans gather more and mor information about animals easily and also get opportunities to see diferent types of animals and on the other hand zoos and national parks also good for animals safety .
To wrap up, animals are most important part of world so government and public should try to save wild animals.
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- Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoos Others believe that there are good reasons for having zoos discuss both these views and give your opinion 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02875399361 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72268222511 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485623003195 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.2975951904 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 125.396351215 49.4020404114 254% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 224.857142857 106.682146367 211% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.7142857143 20.7667163134 215% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.2857142857 7.06120827912 259% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372029176565 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184596652505 0.084324248473 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130130898527 0.0667982634062 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227482261121 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125092537314 0.056905535591 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.6 13.0946893788 188% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.82 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.1190380762 194% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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