Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoos. Others believe that there are good reasons for having zoos.
discuss both these views and give your opinion.
In recent years, zoos have become a part of controversial debate. Some people state that animals should not be confined in zoos and others believe that these places have some beneficial purposes for our society. In this essay, I will discuss whether zoos are useful or not and I also shere my opinion.
Some people have an aspect that zoos have an important duty for our society. They believe that these places can be used for many purposes. One of them is that these places are good for children's education. By visiting zoos, children can learn lots of information about animals. Another one is that zoos can be helpful to instil animal love to children. Other purpose of zoos is enterteinment. In these days, many people are using these places in order to have a good time.
However, In my opinion, no one has a right to deprive animals of their natural habitat. This such an implemention is seen as a turtore by many animal right supporters. This might be true because animals in zoos have limited areas and it restricks their motions. Moreover, It widely acknowledged that at virtually all animals are social creatures and this places directly undermine animals' social life.
It might be true that zoos can be rewarding for children. However, we can find another solution, instead of be kept animals in a restricking lands, to educate our children. For instance, today, there are many beneficial documentaries about animals' life and we can encourage our children to watch them.
Overall, although some people see zoos as a place for education or entertainment, I believe that animals rights are much more important than other factors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93884892086 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62327897252 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514388489209 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0386051853 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.2777777778 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4444444444 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305449564163 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103044902368 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683492267181 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17889540735 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688353090388 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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