One of the highly controversial issue today relates to that of ZOO. While some people believe that zoos should remain to keep will predators, some other oppose that it is crucial and zoos should be closed for good. In this essay I would shade some light on both of these views and will state my opinion on the matter.
The history of zoos began in 18 century as a purpose to preserve wild animals before extinction as well as for educational purpose. Protecting wild animals from their human enemies was every day issue, therefore, environmental activists as well as governments across the world developed zoos to protect them from hunters. However, running zoo with different kind of species followed with high cost to run it; to cover at least part of daily expenses zoos opened it doors to public who paid an entrance fee. The prime example is Zoo in Peking, where members of public pay fees to see the only one publically exposed giant pandas. Entrance fees cover hundred per cent of all zoo's expenses.
On the other hand, some people might oppose that removing wild species from their natural territories could lead to unbalanced biodiversity. It is generally known that each animal is a predator or has at least the one, keeping animals in their homelands prevent disappearing of others. For instance, in The Czech republic, in 1990 removed all wildely living squirrels from forest with result of disappearing of all beabers.
To sum up, zoos play an important role in education as well as preserving extinction of wild animals, however, this trend follows with risk of disbalance in biodevrsity. In my opinion, I believe that protecting animals especially from hunters and global warming in artificial environment outweigh its disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'century' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'centuries'.
Suggestion: centuries
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Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, well, while, as for, at least, for instance, kind of, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02054794521 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69186796192 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616438356164 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8466228864 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.769230769 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181052242781 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655845525656 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713255056998 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121715777814 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822991212854 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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