Dear Smith,
I hope you are doing well. I am pleased to inform you that Nidhi and me are recently got engage and we bought our new house in Toronto.
I am elastic to know that you are going to visit British Columbia next week for the first time. Since, I leave over there for 2 years during my study, I will suggest you a few visiting places, which will make your trips remarkable. Firstly, you have to visit Woodbine park, which is very famous in Canada because of it's lake, as well as adventure activities. Apart from this, you can take a look of museum related to wildlife animals, and I know learning about animal life is one of your interesting subject. After visiting museum, you can enjoy dinner at Subaru family restaurant, located near to museum, is famous for their Mexican dishes. However, you have limited time to enjoy your vacation, I also recommend to visit KANS festival in downtown, is well-known for puppet shows and traditional art performances.
I hope these will help you to make your trip memorable, and I wish you a good vacation time. Enjoy!!!!
Kind Regards,
Dhruv Patel
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... we bought our new house in Toronto. I am elastic to know that you are going t...
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Line 5, column 705, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommend visiting'.
Suggestion: recommend visiting
...ted time to enjoy your vacation, I also recommend to visit KANS festival in downtown, is well-know...
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Line 10, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Enjoy!!!! Kind Regards, Dhruv Patel
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, so, well, apart from, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 919.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71282051282 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43984026379 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671794871795 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3193659196 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 4.34317383033 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197457768206 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784088776211 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421323473605 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133500977824 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036513915119 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.