Dear Jane,
How're your vacations going on? I hope you are enjoying this time thoroughly . I'm writing this letter to make your this time even more enjoyable.
Well, I read a book last Sunday, 'The Old Man and The Sea' written by 'Earnest Hamingway' , and I must confess how great book this is. Despite having minor interest in novels I enjoyed the story of struggle of an old man and a young boy during their fish catching journey.
Honestly speaking, I never recommend the things which I don't like, but, this time I can't resist myself to refer this book to you because not only it will help you in entertaining but also you would feel motivated and positive. What's more, your English language skills will be embellished due to the vocabulary it contains.
The way you can get this book easily is online. Just order the same either on Amazon or Flipcart , and it will be delivered within five working days at your place . Otherwise, approach any local library of your city to borrow it for some days.
Do write to me about your experience after reading it.
Lots of love,
Maria
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Jane, Howre your vacations going on? I hope yo...
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...pe you are enjoying this time thoroughly . Im writing this letter to make your thi...
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Suggestion: I'm
...you are enjoying this time thoroughly . Im writing this letter to make your this t...
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...le. Well, I read a book last Sunday, The Old Man and The Sea written by Earne...
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...and The Sea written by Earnest Hamingway , and I must confess how great book this ...
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...espite having minor interest in novels I enjoyed the story of struggle of an old ...
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...g, I never recommend the things which I dont like, but, this time I cant resist myse...
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
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...er the same either on Amazon or Flipcart , and it will be delivered within five wo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, honestly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64248704663 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31730197168 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.730569948187 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6816544495 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6666666667 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0833333333 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41666666667 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274289234888 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863765470311 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080365105369 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135325592231 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192264160857 0.0580467560999 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.