Dear Anne,
I am writing this letter to invite you to celebrate National Day with us in Singapore. Since, it is a public holiday I will be on leave and we can celebrate together.
Let me explain in detail. Celebrations begin in the evening with a show put up by the army followed by a cultural dance. Then a speech is given by the President and the National Anthem is played. As we are celebrating 50 years of Independence there is going to be a grand celebration and the whole place is decorated with flags. Certain ares will be closed to the public during the event. Also, dance and singing performances will be put up.
Additionally, I would like to inform you that I have booked our tickets for the celebration since, this will be your first time. We will begin the day by taking a tour of the city, where you will witness the beautiful landscape and breathtaking view of the city. Post the tour we will partake in the celebrations held at the stadium. Finally, the day ends with fireworks and we pray and hope for a fruitful and bright future of the country and our countrymen.
I look forward to receiving your response.
Your Friend,
Katie
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56937799043 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6664501259 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583732057416 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7772742397 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.2142857143 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9285714286 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19900981143 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078431565413 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862158367242 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112959136336 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354514184832 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.63 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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