Write a letter to your friend, who lives in another town, and invite him/her to a party you are going to organise.
In your letter, explain:
why are you holding the party
who are expected to be present at the party
invite your friend and give directions on how to get there
Dear Bob,
I haven’t heard from you in a long time and hope that all is well with you. Anyway, you will be glad to know that I have got a job offer from one of the leading telecommunication companies, and I will be starting the new job after a couple of weeks from now. You will also be happy to know that I am going to hold a party to celebrate this great occasion of getting a “new job” on the 18th of February next month. Please be present at the party and make it even more special.
My family members and some of our old-time university friends, like Peter, Jonson and Raul, are expected to be present at the party also. I have already invited 25 guests and most of them are friends and family.
I hope, you haven’t forgotten the direction to come to my place. But, in case if you don’t have the direction with you, here it is once again- first, take the M12 highway, drive about 2 hours until you hit the Jupiter Street. Turn right on Jupiter and pass a few signal lights until you reach the Victoria shopping mall, and my home is right behind the mall a couple of blocks away. Just call me if you have trouble finding my place.
I look forward to seeing you at the party.
Warm wishes,
Louis Ferguson
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 372, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...elebrate this great occasion of getting a 'new job' on the 18th of Febr...
^
Line 9, column 133, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...are expected to be present at the party also. I have already invited 25 guests and m...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, first, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1031.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42489270386 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36567520258 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613733905579 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6131056761 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9166666667 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201569532352 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759704468738 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332420140464 0.0603063233224 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121551883095 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0147868829155 0.0580467560999 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.