Dear Meena,
I hope you are doing well. I am very glad that you have plan to come Patan next year. You and me both had very great memories of the vacations in Patan in our childhood.
In my opinion, the best time to visit the town is the after monsoon. The weather is always very good in the October here. You would love the celebration of the festival Diwali during this time. During this time it would be various gathering for Indian New Year celebrations. You would have chance to meet most of your friends form the school.
I suggest you the hotel Gold Palace would be the best option for you and your family to stay. It is in the center of the city and near from the market and bus stop so that you can easily manage to go anywhere. The Malhar hotel is also the alternative option for your stay which have the same facilities with the cheaper cost.
I would be very happy if you stay in my house with your family. There are 2 desperate bedrooms for you and your family in my home. After long time we will meet so of you would stay with me, we would have time to hang out in the night.
I am waiting for hearing from you.
Yours lovingly,
Unnati
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Meena, I hope you are doing well. I am very gla...
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Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'planned'.
Suggestion: planned
...oing well. I am very glad that you have plan to come Patan next year. You and me bot...
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Line 13, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or hearing from you. Yours lovingly, Unnati
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.2466367713 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.01922231128 2.54303337028 79% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542600896861 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8212001077 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.1875 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9375 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0625 4.34317383033 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177270277918 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736750186913 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752547159523 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866044013857 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712070386771 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.48 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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