write a letter to your friend you stayed with him or her and forget your watch over there
say thanks to him or her
about what u forget
now what he or she need to do
dear Rabia,
hope you and your family is doing well. I must want to say thank's to you for your hospitality during last week when I stayed at your place
firstly, I'm writing to you inform you that I forgot my watch in your bedroom perhaps it could be in the drawer next to the bed I was in rush while doing packing my luggage accordingly, as I was getting late for airport.
As we discussed that you will visit my home next month for stay over, I'm very excited and had lots of plans accordingly. we will visit some famous places here in my city and remember don't forget to bring my watch as it was given by my sister on my birthday last year.
looking forward to seeing from you
once again I want to say thank's for your hospitality.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Dear
dear Rabia, hope you and your family is do...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Firstly
...last week when I stayed at your place firstly, Im writing to you inform you that I fo...
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Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... when I stayed at your place firstly, Im writing to you inform you that I forgot...
^^
Line 9, column 71, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...visit my home next month for stay over, Im very excited and had lots of plans acco...
^^
Line 9, column 122, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...ited and had lots of plans accordingly. we will visit some famous places here in m...
^^
Line 9, column 184, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ous places here in my city and remember dont forget to bring my watch as it was give...
^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Looking
...y my sister on my birthday last year. looking forward to seeing from you once again...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Once
... looking forward to seeing from you once again I want to say thanks for your hos...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, firstly, look, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 604.0 937.175257732 64% => OK
No of words: 142.0 206.0 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25352112676 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20389908938 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 127.690721649 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633802816901 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 180.0 290.88556701 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.4519334573 44.8134815571 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 120.8 76.5299724578 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4 16.8248392259 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 4.34317383033 230% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193389364621 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112514677982 0.0766984524023 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580719097092 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1135059941 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662030008682 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 70.7449484536 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.67 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 15.0 41.2886597938 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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