Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
tell him that you left the coat behind
explain what the coat looks like
make some suggestions about how to get the coat back
Dear Barbara,
I hope you are in good spirit. I want to thank you for inviting me to your new house in Bangalore last Saturday. We met after a long time and I really enjoyed a lot. My return journey was also good, and I reached home yesterday. While unpacking my stuff today morning, I realized that I forgot my formal coat at your place, the coat contains some of my important belonging too.
Let me explain in detail. It was a light brown colour formal coat; the inner pocket of the coat contains my credit card from the Axis bank and one parker pen on which my name is engraved.
I believe that the coat would be on the hinge of the room’s door, that I was using. Please keep the coat and other articles at a safe place, as these items are really important for me. My father is coming to Bangalore next week for his business meeting. He would collect my stuff from you.
Please take care of yourself and I hope to see you soon.
Best regards,
Harman Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: TODAY_MORNING[1]
Message: This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, 'this morning' is used.
Suggestion: this morning
...ome yesterday. While unpacking my stuff today morning, I realized that I forgot my formal coa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, really, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 799.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36612021858 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20889430944 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639344262295 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0403178875 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.4615384615 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0769230769 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.76923076923 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181198361951 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525089029125 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561380799116 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104433685091 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477067087345 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.47 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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